今天我们会特别来讲解雅思写作当中，中国考生常常会犯的用词累赘的错误，这类错误看上去似乎并无语法错误，但是因为用词重复，造成意思重复，依然会被扣分。接下来请看雅思内容：雅思作文四项评分标准中的用词
用词累赘
由于对某些词和词组的意思缺乏真正的理解或把要表达的意思先用中文想好,然后逐字翻译成英语,造成累赘。例如:
① (误)In my opinion, I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be banned.
(正)I think t he production and sale of fake commodities should be banned.
in my opinion与I think意思完全相同,可以删去其中的一个。
② (误)Scientists are trying to find a solution to solve t he problem of energy shortage .
(正)Scientist s are trying to find a solution to the problem of energy shortage.
一个词与它的派生词一起出现,造成意思重复,给人以累赘的感觉,改正后的句子变得简洁多了。
③ (误)Waste gas is the main cause which leads to air pollution .
(正)Waste gas is t he main cause of air pollution.
cause和lead to都表原因,同时使用造成意思重复。
以上为雅思内容：雅思作文四项评分标准中的用词
