SAT写作文章评析

2022-05-19 17:19:52

  SAT作文评分时,每个评分者通常会对文章给出1分至6分的整数分数,6分为阅卷老师能给出的最高分。想要有针对性地准备和练习SAT文章写作,必须非常清楚其评分标准。本文将列举几篇文章,并精析这些文章的优缺点,帮助读者们更好地理解极为重要的评分标准。接下来就一起来看看今天SAT考内容:

   

  文章评析

  接下来,各位将读到几篇真题作文。希望读者认真阅读各篇文章之后,对照上面表格里所描述的“内容”、“结构”、“语言”这三个方面的评估要点,作出相应的分数评估(1分至6分),并对照每篇文章后面给出的分数,仔细思考评分标准的具体应用。

  1) 真题作文例一

  2008年3月的SAT Essay真题为"Should people always be loyal(是否人应当始终忠诚)?"。请读者阅读下文,并评估其得分。

  Loyalty is one of the most esteemed traits of all cultures in the world, though the opposite, betrayal is the most condemned. Dante’s Ninth Circle of Hell, the circle of the worst sinners, is reserved for those who have committed treasury; the Bible paints Judas for committing a most unforgivable sin, the betrayal of Christ. However, the idea of loyalty has been impressed upon the public blindly. At times, devotion is not only unnecessary, but also dangerous for the follower.

  In India, marriage traditions have dictated for centuries that the bride’s family must offer a dowry (usually comprised of cash and extremely expensive gifts) for the groom’s family. The Indian government has outlawed such practices since the 1960s, in attempts to modernize the country and lift some traditional burdens off the shoulders of its citizens. However, dowries are more often than not still presented to grooms’ families today, and trouble arises when grooms or their families (or both) demand extra dowry money from the wife and her family. In that instance, a wife may be tortured until her hapless family members pay up; if they are unable to produce the money, her own husband may burn her in a crime descriptively named “bride burning,” then marry another woman. One young girl, in 2003, who famously demonstrated that loyalty was overrated in this situation, reported the demands and threats to the police. She was immediately praised by women all over India, who admired her bravery for fighting off greedy and cruel in-laws, as well as reporting her husband. It was previously believed that this system of fidelity to one’s husband was absolute, which caused many Indian women to refrain from calling in police intervention. However, loyalty to those who would hurt us is undeserved, and threatening or harmful actions should lead us to break off communication, trust, and end those relationships.

  Another pretense under which loyalty is used to take advantage of others is through the advertising tool of “brand loyalty.” Marketers have found that consumers can be cultivated to remain faithful to certain brands for years, and that buyers come to develop personal preferences that lead them to repeatedly purchase the same brands. Modern advertising is largely aimed at creating a loyal customer base in order to stabilize the profits of multi-million dollar corporations. Yet many of these brands may follow unethical practices such as animal testing and working with sweatshop factory owners. By retaining brand loyalty to such companies’ products, consumers are unwittingly supporting the continuation of animal cruelty and unfair working conditions. It is best to be informed about our purchases, and choose products that benefit the world, rather than simply buy a brand out of habit or esthetic preference.

  The concept of loyalty is a beautiful one: unswerving faith and trust in a person or idea. However, the unscrupulous have also employed the ideal to unethical deeds. People should determine for themselves why loyalty is necessary in certain situations, and whether or not this loyalty is doing more harm than good. (504 words)

  这篇文章的评分是满分6分,你是否猜中了呢? 没错,这就是传说中的满分范文。现在,我们就对照前面提出的“内容”、“结构”、“语言”三要点,来分析本文的特点。

  


  需要补充的是,因为中美文化差异,中国学生尤其需要注意:不能因为自古以来“忠诚”通常被视为宝贵的品质,就强迫自己必须写支持”being loyal”的文章。当然,也不必因为想要独树一帜而非逼迫自己写与大众观点向左的文章——刻意而为之反显得矫情、做作。正确的做法应当是:先考虑自己是否有说服力强的例子和理由来支持某个观点,如果没有,就从另一个方面来考虑。

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