gre作文出国第一步要搞好issue-西泽读留学

　　备考资料大家用的多证明是经过大家的认可的，但是就像其他考试一样，备考gre考试的童鞋们也会有专门的一个社区叫寄托天下，今天小编带来gre作文出国寄托天下的内容就是gre作文出国第一步要搞好issue。

　　issue要入门首先要认真读题，把题目彻底读懂。很多同学不认真读题，发习作上论坛的时候都不抄题。我每次批改版友的作文时都会对照着看下题目，所以对于不抄题目的行为十分不满。新G的作文时间很短，加上字数的压力，导致部分同学写的时候不认真读题，结果很悲剧。

　　如何做到认真审题?首先要避免误读。今天才看到一篇习作，写的是issue 58

　　Issue 58 Learning is primarily a matter of personal discipline; students cannot be motivated by school or college alone.

　　Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

　　这道题比较特别，前后两句话用分号隔开，是什么意思呢?前一句说学习主要是一件关乎个人自律的事情，后一句说仅仅靠学校、大学不能激励学生。一般可理解为后一句是前一句的某种推论或impllication，这两句话可以当成一个整体来讨论。我们可以看看这位同学怎么写的

　　In my opinion, whether or not students should be motivated by educational institution as learning is a matter of personal discipline is mainly depended on what kind of those educational institution they attend. For students learning in vocational school, it is unnecessary for school to do anything for encouraging students in learning, as the students have already known their professional orientation before enrollment.

　　一看开头我就断定这篇文章废掉了。因为作者将cannot误读为should not 而紧接着的unnecessary也是顺着这个思路去写的，这就是对题目的大大的误解。因为should是一个价值判断的问题，应该与否关乎我们的三观，是一个所谓的normative satement，而能不能做某件事则是一个客观的positive (testable) statement。学过经济学的同学都会明白这两者之间的区别。这道题分明是在讨论学校能否激励学生，而前面说学习是关乎自律的事情是后一句的某种依据和前提，因此这里的关键是学校是否有机会、有资源去激励学生，而不是应不应该的问题。

　　这里要强调的是issue的题干里每个词都需要我们在下笔之前仔细推敲，探明整个的意思。避免误读题目实在是写好issue或者不写砸issue的第一步。

　　在不误读的基础上，还要学会抓住题干中的关键词，所谓抓住不仅仅是认识到这是关键词，而是要在整篇文章里反复去回应这个关键词。这里以issue 1为例。

　　As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.

　　这道科技类的题目相对是比较好写的，但是部分同学在写的时候没能紧扣题干里的关键词。这道题的关键在于abitlity to think for themselves。而事实上think这个概念是很难写的，我们都知道think是什么意思，但是要说清楚think是怎么一回事却很难，因为这是个相对抽象的概念。比如某同学写的中间段

　　In research field, thinking is the key of achievement, and actually the existence of many kinds of physical axioms and outstanding speculation have already prove that. The path of thinking out is not smooth, but more thorny. In the process, massive expected and unexpected problems keep testing thinkers’ ability, as well as their patience. By that time, it is better to rely on production of technology release the pressure outside, leading no harm to ability, but assistance to process of thinking. According to that, the ability of thinking scientist possess can be utilized maximized, bringing to scientist the outstanding discovery that they expected, or are even surprised with.

　　整段其实也多次提到了thinking 但是读完之后还是不知道在说啥一方面是表达的问题，更重要的是对于thinking这个概念没有具体讨论。