tpo44独立写作题目分析及范文赏析!
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话题：一些人认为现在很多家长很忙没时间陪伴孩子，最有效时间是娱乐活动比如运动或玩游戏，而另一些人认为这些时间应该做和学习相关的事情。
高分词汇：entertainment activities 娱乐活动; intelligence 智力;coordinate 协调;proficiently 熟练地; collaborate with 合作; stamina 精力; be addicted to 沉浸于…; sedentary 久坐的;self-esteem 自尊
思路： 根据自己的理解选择其中一个观点，并提出两到三点的原因对其进行阐述。观点一选择运动或玩游戏，对孩子成长很重要，能够提高智力，提高协调合作能力并释放压力;对孩子身心健康发展有好处，有健康的生活方式并积极的生活态度。
范文：
In recent years, there has been a trend among busy parents toward utilizing spare time to have fun such as arts and sports, because these entertainment activities do not have a direct relation with children’s schoolwork.
It lies in the fact that education is valuable by people only when it improves students’ academic record. Although playing games and sport are not directly related to academic record, these entertainment activities have countless benefits to students’ success in their future careers.
The idea that sport is important to children’s development has been widely accepted. First of all, sport can enhance intelligence. Playing games enables children to know how to coordinate different parts of their bodies. The advantage is that children who can use sport instruments proficiently cab juggle different task in their adulthood. Playing games can foster the culture of cooperation among teenagers as they are required to collaborate with each other in a basketball team or a football team. Playing games is also considered as a healthy way of relieving stress, because it can lighten one’s mood and reduce anxiety.
Playing games also has a beneficial effect on children’s physical and mental health. Children who engage in physical activity can constantly maintain a healthy weight and have stamina to handle their schoolwork.
This is particularly important, considering that young people are increasingly addicted to the sedentary activity, such as watching TV.
Furthermore, children who exercise habitually normally have a positive attitude to life, which enables them to cope with stress easily.
Therefore, we can see how important some non-academic activities can be to students’future career success.Sports and playing games can develop students’intellectual skills and social skills, while they are able to improve students’ physical health and self-esteem.
