2017年和十个错误。在托福写作中，同学们需要明白写作的要点和需要规避的错误。搞清楚这两件事情相信大家的写作一定不会出问题。为帮助考生拿到写作高分，
托福写作要点：
1、从句单独成句
从句的“从”意为“从属”，所以，它是不具备独立的功能的。也就是说，不能把从句连接词首字母大写变成一个独立的句子。从句是复合句的一部分，从句和主句就像台湾和大陆一样是不可分割的。当从句被写成独立的句子，就犹如台湾远离了祖国母亲的怀抱，于心何忍?!所以，从句必须和主句一起构成一个完整的句子。
2、两个或多个独立的句子用逗号连接
逗号并不具备链接两个独立句子的功能。
两个独立的句子有以下几种写法：
第一，两个句子用句号隔开，句首都需要首字母大写。
第二，用逻辑连接词连接两个句子，写作中常用的逻辑连接词为并列关系(and，分号)、转折(but, yet)、因果(for, so)。
第三，写成复合句的形式，即名词性从句、定语从句或状语从句。
3、单复数不一致
单复数原则涉及可数名词单复数和动词三单(即主语为单数且动词使用现在时，动词需要用单数)。这个道理无人不知，但往往实践和理论是脱节的。
4、动词原形做主语
动词原形是不可以做主语的，必须用动名词(doing)或不定式(to do)的形式。
托福写作十个错误：
1、例证夸张
For example, when a doctor faces a patient who has got cancer, the doctor cannot tell the truth, for the truth may cause the patient’s immediate death.
虽然善意的谎言是必要的，但是其功效显然没有这么大。
2、成分多余
According to a comprehensive investigation which is carried out by Chinese Academy of Social Sciences shows that there is an increase in the number of university students who are taking part-time jobs.
该句中的shows that是多余的成分。
3、词性混乱
However, the questions such as "Have you ever regretted marrying your husband" may be very privacy and embarrassingly.
句子中的privacy和embarrassingly应该改成private和embarrassing。
4、时态错误
Some people claimed that news media has enormous influence and is a detrimental creation.
claimed应该改为claim。
5、用词不当
学生们写的作文里或多或少都会有一些用词不当的问题，但是要注意的是一些最最基本的错误是不能犯的。
In the show, if participators answer twenty problems that the host mentioned correctly, they will get five hundreds thousand U.S. dollars as a prize.
problems应改为questions
6、拼写错误
这里的拼写错误不是指在考试时候的手误，而是本身对词汇拼写记忆的错误。
In conclusion, issue of whether parents are the best teachers is a complex one, requiring subjective judgement, consequently, there are no easy or certain answers.
judgement应改为judgment
7、乱用大词
First of all, children can earn money from their jobs, although there isn’t too much, but they will keep their salary gingerliness.
这里的gingerliness根本是不知所云。该句子还有以下问题：
1)该作文题目是讲学生是否应该做兼职，因此children的出现就显得很莫名其妙;
2)although和but是不能连用的;
3)指代不明，they不知道是指代前面的什么;
8、表达中式
The second argument-it might have been noticed by others-is that in some occasion, it is quite difficult to compare parents to teachers because parents are a kind of people, teachers are a kind of vocation.
该句的表达过于中式化。
9、表意重复
They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
The show is so compelling but attractive.
compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。
10、固定用法错误
To some extends, I agree with the author’s general assertion that if parents also have a comprehensive sense of professional knowledge.
To some extends应改为To some extent
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