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托福TPO32 独立写作试题：
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
托福满分作文-范文赏析：
The most influential people in a society are often in their middle ages or even older. They obtain a better knowledge in a specific field as well as more abundant experiences in their longer span of life. However, it is unreasonable to admit that young people are absent when society is on an evolutionary change, in fact, they all have tremendous affection for it.
Teens or twenties are taking an active role in politics. Although their direct influences are weak, partly because they do not have a seat in the inner circle of governments, there are a horde of roads for them to glory. For instance, in China, people who are over 18 possess the right to elect and to be elected. Therefore, if only they reach that age, they can directly lead or at least participate in a political decision. Beside, affected by the modern society, the system of civil servants is on revolutionary change, among them being the juveniles. More and more new-comers are shown as product and highly-skilled as the old hand, especially after a while of training. Suffice to say, young generations are involved in political decision-making with power.
It is imperative to say that young people also indirectly affect the whole country. We, young students have more passion in following latest news, discussing politics and policies, and mastering in social work. With the advent of the internet, our creative thoughts can be swiftly exchanged and spread through the critiques or comments we post, which run into a strong will loud enough to be heard. Governments or other powerful bureaucracies often take it seriously. Even more, officials are used to gathering peoples' preferences through an open vote raised on the main websites. For example, the Chinese government has raised a vote about whether to extend the retirement age, if yes, how long. But after 1 week voting, almost all citizens opposed the extension on retiring, and the statistics show half of the voters are below 30. As a result, the government put this agenda aside.
Young people also exert their effects on society by working in non-governmental organizations. They are concerned about severe environment issues, natural resources or focus more on human beings, such as helping the poor, running for charity and caring for the old. Statistics from the National Report suggests that nearly 80% of social workers are young, and what they are fighting for not only sets an alarm to the official ministries, but also makes substantial progress in improving the social welfare and social justice. Those outcomes do make a better world, no one can deny that what they have achieved does nothing about our future.
All in all, the young are and have become influential in decision-making, because they can directly or indirectly set step in political affairs via various methods as well as improve the society in all aspects through their hard work in non-governmental organizations. Nothing can contradict their efforts in making a better world.
托福作文满分要素剖析:
一、 语言表达
本文的句式结构并不复杂。但是长短句结合，句式结构丰富，让行文显得非常流畅自然。而用词方面，作者并没有追求非常高难度的词汇，而是使用了一般的词汇来进行分析。因此整篇文章的风格属于平实亲切的类型，重点在于分析透彻、说理清晰。
1. Although their direct influences are weak, partly because they do not have a seat in the inner circle of governments, there are a horde of roads for them to glory.中间的partly部分作为插入语，解释的是influence are weak的原因。用词方面，seat此处表示席位，inner circle of the government表示政府内部，a horde of表示很多，都是固定的用法，，提升了作者的整体水平。
2. With the advent of the internet, our creative thoughts can be swiftly exchanged and spread through the critiques or comments we post, which run into a strong will loud enough to be heard. With the advent of是经常使用的表示随着……的出现的说法。Post comment是固定搭配，表示发布。，which是一个非限制性定语从句，修饰了前面的critiques or comments we post。
3. Those outcomes do make a better world, no one can deny that what they have achieved does nothing about our future. Do此处表示强调。后半句采用了双重否定表示肯定的说法。因此本句应当翻译为，我们不能否认他们的成就对未来没有作用。也就是我们必须承认他们的成就对未来有作用。我们也可以借鉴这种双重否定的用法。
二、 逻辑结构
本文是总分总的结构。首先提出总观点，年轻人对社会有很大影响。之后用三个并列的分论点，分别从三个方面说明了年轻人对于社会的影响。最后进行观点总结和重申。
网温馨提醒：考生们拿到托福作文试题，审题后，先决定总体思路，然后列出两三个具体的分论点，每个论点找出一些例子来说明。这里要注意例子的选择，尽可能生活化、生动化、形象化，不要太死板，
