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托福TPO 9 独立写作试题：
Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.
托福满分作文-范文赏析：
When it comes to the creativity of children nowadays, quite a few people would claim that technology makes children become lazier than ever before. According to my rule of thumb, however, children’s creativity has benefited considerably from modern technology.
First of all, computers and the internet inspire the intelligence of children, encouraging them to think and act creatively. The internet provides a huge amount of information that is related to the development of children - either physically or mentally. That allows children access to a wealth of knowledge they are interested in. For example, those children who like to invent new games can gain much knowledge from the internet, thus inspiring their creativity. In contrast, children in the past had limited opportunity to gain the newest knowledge they were interested in.
In addition, modern technology creates a sense of connection, contributing to the exchange of ideas among people all over the world - including children. Parents, who have already had decades of trial and failure in the field, would have a clear idea of what kind of knowledge and quality is required for the job. Parents, who have already had decades of trial and failure in the field, would have a clear idea of what kind of knowledge and quality is required for the job. This helps children hone their social skills creatively. Confronted with complex communication, children have to explore various new ways to deal with relationships. In the process, children are gradually learning how to make new friends and how to maintain old friendship.
Last but not least, there are more methods and mediums for children to improve their ability of creativity. Plenty of online games, for example, are specialized for the development of children’s creativity, thus help children improve their imagination and creativity while playing. Numerous books and magazines are published specialized in mental growth of children. Researchers are now exploring more better ways for parents who want to improve their children’s creativity.
By and large, although technology simplifies humans’ life, it greatly enhances the creativity of children by offering knowledge, methods and communication medium.
托福作文满分要素剖析:
一、 语言表达
本文长短句结合，流畅自然，很有节奏感。作者使用了正式性的词语和用法，非常符合学术性文章的写作风格。
1. That allows children access to a wealth of knowledge they are interested in. access to 表示通道，此处是让学生能够接触很多知识的意思。A wealth of用的非常生动，表示数量很大。
2. In addition, modern technology creates a sense of connection, contributing to the exchange of ideas among people all over the world - including children. A sense of表示一种XX的感觉。后面使用了现在分词形式进行解释说明。破折号此处表示停顿，相当于逗号，表示补充说明。
二、 逻辑结构
本文是总分总的结构。首段交待背景，给出观点，科技让人生活更好。中间用三个并列的段落提出了三个分论点证明观点。最后进行观点总结和重申。
网温馨提醒：考生们拿到托福作文试题，审题后，先决定总体思路，然后列出两三个具体的分论点，每个论点找出一些例子来说明。这里要注意例子的选择，尽可能生活化、生动化、形象化，不要太死板，
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