2017年4月15日托福写作真题答案及解析-西泽读留学

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　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement. It is better to make friends with intelligent people than with the people who have a good sense of humor.

　　当相识很久的朋友做了一些我们不喜欢的事情，是否要维持这段友谊?

　　维持：

　　R1.年代久远的友谊或者说老朋友的好处。展开可以考虑，老朋友通常能互相帮助，互相倾诉;

　　R2.有一定的方法可以解决自己的疑虑。展开可以考虑，直接沟通，了解缘由或者给予帮助。

　　不维持：

　　R1.老朋友的性格极有可能发生本质的改变;

　　R2.对朋友印象的改变，直接影响两人之间的相处模式。

　　范文

　　“A friend is one who believes in you when you have ceased to believe in yourself". This quote aptly describes the role that a friend plays in our life. As we can see that friends are always needed in every stage in our life, while more and more people now hold the opinion that the friends that we can have fun with are more valuable, reasoning the most important feature of friends is endless fun to be around with, I hold the opposite viewpoint that a friend in need is a friend indeed, thus smart friends are desirable in life.

　　First of all, whenever we get problems in study we can turn to our close friends for help, and we both can enhance our knowledge. For instance, should we have difficulty understanding a concept or certain theory from a course, discussion with our friends who have a good command of that subject would bring home to a clear understanding of the definition. Through communication, we can gain some idea from our friend to see what they are thinking about over the issue, which can inspire or stimulate us to formulate our own viewpoints. What’s more, after exchanging opinions, we can broaden our thought and better understand the knowledge.

　　Secondly, whenever we are suffering a hard time dealing with our work or study, a friend of high IQ provide assistance will help us overcome the period smoothly. Sometimes, the problems that we face can be bearable and we can solve them by ourselves but there will also be times that it seems so bleak that we need other people to help us solve them. For example, if we have a program which has to be done in a short time, and we don’t even have time dealing with our meals, a real friend can help us eliminate the obstacle in practical ways. They may cook or buy meals for us, who seems to be inconspicuous but will bring us great warmth during a hard time. Thus those friends instead of who amuse us are more important since similar circumstances inevitably occur.

　　At last, it seems that most of the people have experienced being alone in a strange city or country, and when we get ill, the only one who can help us is the friends that are sharp enough to notice our slight difference, even in the voice or the tone, instead of the ones who are always ready to make fun. Under this circumstance, a sharp friend will spare no effort to take care of us, reminding us to take medicine on time and do some basic housework to make a healthy environment for us to recuperate. Thanks to their sincere help, we will no longer feel lonely although we stay at a totally strange place only because of the existence of the friends who we can turn to for help.

　　Another quote to clarify my stance, "When friends stop being frank and useful to each other, the whole world loses some of its radiance." thus we also should try to be as sharp as our friends.

　　参考语料(from wikihow)：

　　“-Ask to be heard.

　　Whether you decide to set up a face-to-face meeting withthe person, or communicate via telephone or electronic device, the goal is thesame: ask the person for time to express your thoughts and feelings about theconflict.

　　-Discussthe issue.

　　Some discussions in life are harder to have than others.When a conflict has occurred and negative feelings have grown, it is difficultto start the conversation. The goal would be to frame the conversation andguide it toward a peaceful resolution to manage the hurt and disappointment youare feeling.

　　-Apologizefor your contribution.

　　Most every conflict involves a misunderstanding or misconceptionof what someone did or said. There are things that you must do to loosen thetension in the situation. Taking responsibility for your role is an act thatfosters the open communication that you want, and is necessary to reach aresolution.”

　　托福综合写作

　　Akkidian帝国覆灭的原因，阅读与听力部分的争执点在于：

　　P1：所占领地区人民的反抗rebellion

　　P2：food supply出现问题

　　P3：贸易争端引发的战争

　　阅读：beavers should not be released in England

　　1.Beavers use wood build dams,这样就会block the water flow

　　2.Beavers 会dig holes,然后使ground above腐烂，不利于farmland

　　3.Beavers’teeth are so strong that they will burrow in trees and thus kill the trees

　　听力：releasing beavers的好处大于坏处

　　1.Beavers并不会在每条河流中build dams,很多build dams的河流是still的

　　2.Beavers通常在Long river中，通常long river水流很快,beavers可以slow down the water flow,这样对农田有利