2016年2月28日
Topic 议题： Shelter forest
Sub-point 1
分论点1
Reading：Prevent desertification
Listening：Water is limited in that area. Planting trees means more water are needed, bringing burden to these lands.
Sub-point2
分论点2
Reading：Provide habitat for more animals
Listening：Shelter plants are uniform and lacks diversity, so there are little animals can get benefit from shelter plants.
Sub-point 3
分论点3
Reading：Reduce global warming
Listening：Shelter plants in the area where grasses planted. In fact, grasses can retain and absorb more heat from sun than shelter plants. Therefore, the climate will be warmer.
综合写作范文：
Sample answer:
The writer and the speaker have a debate on Shelter forest. The writer claims that it brings a lot of benefits, which is opposed by the following lecture.
First, the writer claims that shelter forest can prevent desertification. While the speaker views this issue from an opposite angle, according to him/her, Water is limited in that area. Planting trees means more water are needed, bringing burden to these lands.
Secondly, the passage states that it can provide habitats for more animals. However, the speaker casts doubt on this opinion by saying that shelter plants are uniform and lacks diversity, so there are little animal can get benefits from shelter plants.
Last, the writer argues that shelter forest can reduce global warming. However, because of global warming, snow melts at a faster rate. By contrast, in accordance with the speaker, this claim does not hold water. Shelter plants in the area where grasses planted. In fact, grasses can retain and absorb more heat from sun than shelter plants. Therefore, the climate will be warmer.
独立写作题目及解析：
作文题目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smartphone, video games, for fun and entertainment; Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development.
题型类别:教育类
写作思路：今天的这道题目是相对比较简单的。题中认为小孩出去和朋友玩比玩电脑和手机要好。 题目中出现A和B两方，解题的时候可以单说B好。如果想不出三个点，可以说A有什么不好。
写作指导：
Playing simpler toys and playing outside with friends would be better.
单边
花太多时间在科技产品上会影响小孩子的健康。 一方面，video games和电脑游戏会影响学生的生理健康(physical health)。现在随处可见戴眼镜的小孩子(近视myopia)，主要原因也是因为他们过度依赖电子产品。而且。小孩子经常玩video games也会一定程度上占据运动的时间，小孩子比较容易的肥胖症(obesity), 进而引发很多其他的疾病。另一方面。影响学生的心理健康(psychological/mental health)。现在的video games往往会涉及到很多色情暴力(porn & violence)的图片，对小孩子的健康造成很多心理影响。 而且小孩子处于特殊的年龄段(particular stage)，很容易模仿(imitate)暴力的场景，很容易误入歧途(go astray)。
video games会分心(distract)小孩子的学业(academic performance)。小孩子的自控能力不强，一旦沉溺于(addicted)游戏就难以自拔。放学一回家也会玩游戏，从而占据了做作业和复习的时间。
和小朋友一起玩可以培养他们的团队合作精神(teamwork spirit)。现在很多孩子从小就一个人，不知道如何与他人进行合作。如果可以在小时候就经常和朋友一起出去做运动或者玩户外游戏，他们能够慢慢培养起自己在一个团队的责任感，将来进入工作，也会知道如何与别人进行合作。同时，在合作中，孩子也能很好地培养起自己的沟通能力。
